1. important 2. establish 3. boring 4. responsible 5. attitude
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I think health is the most important thing in our lives
2. I have a boring time
When I am bored I exercise
3.I feel more responsible for my parents
4. Attitude 정신적인 태도 사고방식 에디튜드
a hard line attitude 강경한태도
5. Establish 성립하다 형성하다
I had Establish a family
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day to you, Kay! You are a conscientious and a hard-working student. You also have a well-developed sense of humor and lastly, you strive to reach your full potential.
I think health is the most important thing in our lives.
>>> CORRECT.
I have a boring time
>>> I had a boring day.
When I am bored I exercise.
>>> When I am bored, I exercise.
I feel more responsible for my parents
>>> I have a lot of responsibilities toward my parents.
I had Establish a family
>>> CORRECT.
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