1. Is it important to you to eat healthy food? 2. If you catch a cold . What do you do to help you
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1.Yes, I believe that healthy food such as vegetables , fruits and some food made by healthy recipe contain many kinds of ingredient to build healthy human body. By contrast, junk food makes our body fat and unhealthy even cause metabolic syndromes. That’s why we should eat healthy food to keep our health.
2.I feel unwell, the first action I do is having a long sleep and have a rest as long as I can. Because sleeping makes me get my energy back and I can get enough energy to recover my condition. The second action is having proper meal and healthy food by the same reason. The last is taking medicines or seeing a doctor when I feel like the cold wouldn’t go away in a short time.
3.Yes I do. I am working as an occupational health nurse. So I am I am working as an occupational health nurse. So I am keen on learning public health information and providing my colleagues with it to help their health. Also I always care my health according to my knowledge which I have got from Public heal
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Hi [이름]!
Here is the transcript of answers from questions 1-4 on your IELTS practice test. These are alternate ways of answering aside from those that we
had in class. Take note of the differences and the vocabulary and idioms as they may be helpful for you in time.
Great answers! See you in class again tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Yes, I believe that healthy food such as vegetables , fruits and others prepared with healthy ingredients contain many kinds of nutrients to build a strong and capable human body. In contrast /(On the contrary), junk food makes our body fat, unhealthy, and even causes metabolic syndromes. That’s why we should eat healthy food to bolster our health.
2.I feel unwell, the first action I do is having a long sleep and have a rest as long as I can. Because sleeping makes me get my energy back and I can get enough energy to recover my condition. The second action is having proper meal and healthy food by the same reason. The last is taking medicines or seeing a doctor when I feel like the cold wouldn’t go away in a short time.
2.I feel unwell, the first action I do is having a long sleep and have a rest as long as I can. Because sleeping makes me get my energy back and I can get enough energy to recover my condition. The second action is having proper meal and healthy food by the same reason. The last is taking medicines or seeing a doctor when I feel like the cold wouldn’t go away in a short time.
>> If I feel unwell, the first step to take is to take a long sleep and rest for as long as I can. Sleeping makes me get my energy / (regain my strength)for faster recovery. The next thing to do is to have a proper meal and healthy food. Finally, taking medicines or seeking for a doctor\'s advice is necessary when I feel like the cold wouldn’t go away soon.
.Yes I do. I am working as an occupational health nurse. So I am I am working as an occupational health nurse. So I am keen on learning public health information and providing my colleagues with it to help their health. Also I always care my health according to my knowledge which I have got from Public health
>> Yes I do/(Absolutely/ Certainly). I am working as an occupational health nurse so I must be keen on learning about public health to provide my colleagues with accurate information. Most of all, for a health worker like me, it is paramount to always take care of my own health and that is through keeping myself abreast with the latest bulletin from the public health advisory.
4. I am keeping my own ways to keep my physical and mental health. First of all, I do many exercise such as scuba-diving, hiking and working out to build my body. Secondly, I spend my time to do my hobbies doing flower arrangements and singing a song in a karaoke and listening to music. Lastly learning something new and traveling around the world help me relieve my stress and be positive.
>> I have my own itineraries in keeping my physical and mental health. Some of these are scuba-diving, hiking and working out to build and tone my body. Secondly, I spend my time to do my hobbies like doing flower arrangements and singing a song in the karaoke and also listening to music. Lastly, learning something new and traveling around the world help me relieve my stress and help me stay positive.
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