1, Oct. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework Topic
: Write a composition about the news you watched or read about a weather report or news report.
My composition
: Yesterday, I watched a weather report in the evening after talking with you on the celluarphone. The weather report let me know that a typhoon is made near the equator line. Although the Korea Meteorological Office yet forecast the path prediction of this typhoon, my country can be effected by this typhoon in a few days later. So, I wish this typhoon is going to move toward Japan. As you know, I am a Korean who usually dislike Japan.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Wow! you are a very active student.
I know you will be successful in your life!
Thank you so much again for sharing this homework.
See you in our class and enjoy your holiday!
T.Dahlia@_@
Yesterday, I watched a weather report in the evening after talking with you on the celluarphone.
>>Correct
The weather report let me know that a typhoon is made near the equator line.
>>The weather report informed me about a typhoon near the equator line.
Although the Korea Meteorological Office yet forecast the path prediction of this typhoon, my country can be effected by this typhoon in a few days later.
>>Although the Korea Meteorological Office forecast the path prediction of this typhoon, my country can be affected by this typhoon in a few days later.
So, I wish this typhoon is going to move toward Japan.
>> Correct
As you know, I am a Korean who usually dislike Japan.
>>Correct
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