1, Oct. Homework

2013-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework Topic : Write a composition about the news you watched or read about a weather report or news report. My composition : Yesterday, I watched a weather report in the evening after talking with you on the celluarphone. The weather report let me know that a typhoon is made near the equator line. Although the Korea Meteorological Office yet forecast the path prediction of this typhoon, my country can be effected by this typhoon in a few days later. So, I wish this typhoon is going to move toward Japan. As you know, I am a Korean who usually dislike Japan.

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  Hello there [이름]!   Wow! you are a very active student. I know you will be successful in your life! Thank you so much again for sharing this homework. See you in our class and enjoy your holiday!   T.Dahlia@_@     Yesterday, I watched a weather report in the evening after talking with you on the celluarphone. >>Correct The weather report let me know that a typhoon is made near the equator line.  >>The weather report informed me about a typhoon near the equator line. Although the Korea Meteorological Office yet forecast the path prediction of this typhoon, my country can be effected by this typhoon in a few days later. >>Although the Korea Meteorological Office forecast the path prediction of this typhoon, my country can be affected by this typhoon in a few days later.  So, I wish this typhoon is going to move toward Japan. >> Correct As you know, I am a Korean who usually dislike Japan. >>Correct

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