1. some of conversation

2010-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I have figured out some of conversation with a native speaker in a restaurant. Frankly I will have this situation with my professor and classmates. The native helped our dictation class lately but he will stop this that’s why we’ll have a dinner together. However I never seen him before because we just kept in touch with him thorough the e-mail so it’s our first time meeting, however I want make funny time with together. This is just imagination, so if you want you can add more the story. Just as a relay story telling. And I think I might need grammar check from you. Can you please my dear^^???? by the way don't change the contents. I really love this. M=> me H=> the native ** this is continue the next board. **

강사 첨삭

Hello my dearest,   Your wish is my command I’m not going to change the content of you letter hahah, however for checking purposes I have to para-phrase, please try to figure out how and why. If it’s unclear please feel free to ask me ^^ Stay safe, Connie   I have figured out some of conversation with a native speaker in a restaurant. >> I had a conversation with a native speaker in a restaurant.  Frankly I will have this situation with my professor and classmates. >> Frankly, I have to narrate this experience to my professor and classmates. The native helped our dictation class lately but he will stop this that’s why we’ll have a dinner together. >> The native speaker helped out in our dictation class lately but he stopped that is why we’ll have a dinner together. However I never seen him before because we just kept in touch with him thorough the e-mail so it’s our first time meeting, however I want make funny time with together. >> I haven’t seen him before, I just keep in tough with him though email so this is our first meeting and I want to make it a special time for us.This is just imagination, so if you want you can add more the story. Just as a relay story telling. >> This is just an imagination, so you can add more information that would enhance the story.  It’s just a story telling. And I think I might need grammar check from you. Can you please my dear^^???? by the way don't change the contents. I really love this. >> I think I need some grammar corrections as well; can you please do it my dear? By the way, please don’t change the contents, I really love this. M=> me H=> the native >> M represents me and H represents the native speaker.** this is continue the next board. **

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