1. Vacation -Homework
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1. What\'s the most memorable vacation you\'ve had?
My most memorable vacation was a trip to Tokyo and Osaka, Japan with my family. We also went to Disneyland in Japan with my kids, and I remember being amazed and entertained by the fantastic play areas. I would love to go there again the next time I get the chance.
2. What\'s the best thing you experienced during your last vacation?
Last month, I went to Cambodia with a group of close study group members. We went to Angkor Wat, which was hard because we had to walk a lot.
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Hello, Sophia!
Thank you for completing your first homework.
Anyway, see you next week! Enjoy your weekend~
-T.Jhozel
1. What\'s the most memorable vacation you\'ve had?
My most memorable vacation was a trip to Tokyo and Osaka, Japan with my family.
>> Correct!
We also went to Disneyland in Japan with my kids, and I remember being amazed and entertained by the fantastic play areas.
>> Correct!
I would love to go there again the next time I get the chance.
>> I would love to go back the next time I get the chance.
>> I would love to go back the next time I get the chance.
2. What\'s the best thing you experienced during your last vacation?
Last month, I went to Cambodia with a group of close study group members.
>> Correct!
OR: I traveled to Cambodia with a group of members from my close study group last month.
OR: I traveled to Cambodia with a group of members from my close study group last month.
We went to Angkor Wat, which was hard because we had to walk a lot.
>> Correct!
OR: We visited Angkor Wat, which was difficult because we had to walk a long distance.
OR: We visited Angkor Wat, which was difficult because we had to walk a long distance.
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