1. What are the things that make you happy? 2. What are the things that make you sad?
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel happy when I’m in nature that make me a small existence. However, this situation make me feel comfortable and happy.
I feel sad when I’m hungry. Because, I can’t nothing when I’m hungry. It’s really simple but important.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Julia! Great job for doing your homework. It leads you to the goal you are aiming for. Take note that writing is also a form of expressing one\'s self :)
T. Aki ~
I feel happy when I’m in nature that make me a small existence. However, this situation make me feel comfortable and happy.
>>> I feel happy when I\'m in nature even though it makes me a small existence, However, this situation makes me feel comfortable and happy.
I feel sad when I’m hungry. Because, I can’t nothing when I’m hungry. It’s really simple but important.
>>> I feel sad when I\'m hungry because I can\'t do anything when I\'m hungry. It’s really simple but important.
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