1. What is the best thing about your birthplace?

2019-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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1. What is the best thing about your birthplace? My birthplace best thing is quiet and convenient. because I lived the country, althought it\'s closed to elementary school, a middle school , and convenience stores. we had a front yard a little big other than house. so my friends and my neighboorhood visited any time my home and played together. So my father sometimes tolds us that be quiet and played! how we could quiet and played? i missed at that time. 2.How is our accented affected by our birthplace? There are several accent in my country. for example, Busan, Dae -gu, jElla-do, etc in my opinion our accented is affected by each parents, but,someones has a accented go to the difference city very she (he) has to careful to herself. because accent is not use people looking at her, any way, same the accented use peeople not care themselves.

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1. What is the best thing about your birthplace?

My birthplace best thing is quiet and convenient. because I lived the country, althought it\'s closed to elementary school, a middle school , and convenience stores.
>> The best thing about my birthplace is, it is quiet and convenient. Although, it is in the country side, it is close to schools and convenient stores.
we had a front yard a little big other than house. so my friends and my neighboorhood visited any time my home and played together.

>> We had a front yard that was a bit bigger than the other house. So, my friends and my neighbors usually visited me and we played a lot together.
 So my father sometimes tolds us that be quiet and played! 

>> So, my father frequently told us to be quiet while playing.  
how we could quiet and played?
>> But how could we be quiet when playing?

i missed at that time.
>> I miss those times.
2.How is our accent  affected by our birthplace?

There are several accent in my country. for example, Busan, Dae -gu, jElla-do, etc 

>>There are several accents in my country. For example, the Busan, Daegu or Jeolla-do accents and more.  
in my opinion our accented is affected by each parents, but,someones has a accented go to the difference city very she (he) has to careful to herself. because accent is not use people looking at her, any way, same the accented use peeople not care themselves.

>> In my opinion, our accent is affected by our parents. So, when someone with different accent goes to another city or region, he/she has to be careful because people are not used to a different accent.

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