1.what search engines do you make use of? 2. why do you think daum and naver are more popular than y

2013-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I am used to using a naver search engine. Beacaus I like the green and I like the "information people" category. Actually the naver corporation was not populated than yahoo before 10years ago. But naver stressed the green search bar and "information people" category by television advertisement. That is a revolution's chance after the time. People has been interested about "information people" category and people,like a green color, are starting prefer to the naver. That is a point of change that people like a naver. Naver having been efforted to gather a many people. For example simple and modern category and comforte service. That is why naver popular than Yahoo in my country.

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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DOING YOUR HOMEWORK, VINCENT! You did a spectacular job with your homework today. Keep up the good job! I will see again in class. Take care, dear! I am used to using a naver search engine. >>I used to using naver as my search engine.Beacaus I like the green and I like the \"information people\" category. >>It\'s because I like the green color and the \'information people\' category.Actually the naver corporation was not populated than yahoo before 10years ago. >>Actually, naver was not that popular 10 years ago.But naver stressed the green search bar and \"information people\" category by television advertisement. >>But naver emphasized the green search bar and the \'information people\' category by televison advertisement.That is a revolution\'s chance after the time. >>That is revolution\'s chance after that time.People has been interested about \"information people\" category and people,like a green color, are starting prefer to the naver. >> People has been interested about \'information people\' category and people, like the green color, are starting to prefer naver.That is a point of change that people like a naver. >>At that point, people liked naver.Naver having been efforted to gather a many people. >>Naver exerted a lot of effort to gather people.For example simple and modern category and comforte service. >>For example, simple and modern category for comfort service.That is why naver popular than Yahoo in my country. >>That is why naver is more popular than yahoo in my country.

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