1.Which do you prefer, local cars or imported cars? why?
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I prefer to local cars. Because local cars is well constructed the afterservice.
Of course imported cars are very nice and luxury. But the sustence expense is expensive and the expense of car itself is more expensive than local cars.
In these reson, I prefer to local cars.
But If I gave a lot of money, I will choose imported car.
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I agree with your opinion.
I also believe that local cars are more practical.
Thanks so much for doing your best today.
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I prefer to local cars.
>>I prefer local cars.
Because local cars is well constructed the afterservice.
>>Local cars are well constructed, it\'s the afterservice.Of course imported cars are very nice and luxury.
>>Of course imported cars are very nice and luxurious.
But the sustence expense is expensive and the expense of car itself is more expensive than local cars.
>>But the maintenance is expensive and the car itself is more expensive than local cars.In these reson, I prefer to local cars.
>>For these reasons, I prefer local cars.But If I gave a lot of money, I will choose imported car.
>>If I have a lot of money, I will choose an imported car.
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