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1. something to offer
2. take off
3. take a day off
4. take a break from
5. several pieces of
1. Paris is a special destination that has something to offer every kinds of tourists from adventurous to romantic. All visitors will certainly fall in love with magnificent landscapes and various cultures.
2. As soon as taking off the flight, I contacted my friends who stay in touch with.
3. I take a day off today and I will take it easy with next to no physical movement.
4. Lunch time is to take a break from work. After lunch i used to walk around near the park for being refreshed or digestion.
5. At convenient store several pieces of merchandises disiplayed in rows all over the section and we can locate them easily.
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1. something to offer
2. take off
3. take a day off
4. take a break from
5. several pieces of
1. Paris is a special destination that has something to offer every kinds of tourists from adventurous to romantic. All visitors will certainly fall in love with magnificent landscapes and various cultures.
>> Paris is a special destination that has something to offer to every kinds of tourists from adventurous to romantic. All visitors will certainly fall in love with magnificent landscapes and various cultures.
2. As soon as taking off the flight, I contacted my friends who stay in touch with.
>> As soon as the plane took off, I contacted my friends who I stay in touch with.
3. I take a day off today and I will take it easy with next to no physical movement.
>> I took a day off today and will take it easy with next to no physical movement.
4. Lunch time is to take a break from work. After lunch i used to walk around near the park for being refreshed or digestion.
>> Lunch time is the period to take a break from work. After lunch, I usually walk around near the park to refresh myself or have better digestion.
5. At convenient store several pieces of merchandises disiplayed in rows all over the section and we can locate them easily.
>> At convenient stores, several pieces of merchandise are displayed in rows all over the section and we can locate them easily.
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