10.08 Homework

2018-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't have any special plan on holiday but I'm going to watch the soccer match on this friday. the soccer match (Korea versus Uruguay) that holds on this friday will be interesting game as many people are expecting about this match. On that day, there will be not only so many famous Korean players ,but also Uruguay players who are famous in worldwide. I'm looking forward to this friday because we have few chances to see those players on my eyes (directly). So I will take pictures of them with my camera on that day. If I succeed in taking pictures of them, I will upload it on next writing assignment!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for accomplishing your homework once again! I appreciate the time and effort you put in constructing your essay. Well done! I hope you enjoy watching the game!

~~Teacher Kate


1. I don\'t have any special plan on holiday but I\'m going to watch the soccer match on this friday.
>>>I don\'t have any special plans for the holiday but I\'m going to watch the soccer match on Friday.
2. the soccer match (Korea versus Uruguay) that holds on this friday will be interesting game as many people are expecting about this match.
>>>A lot of people are expecting that the soccer match between Korea and Uruguay, which is held on Friday, will be very interesting.
3. On that day, there will be not only so many famous Korean players
,but also Uruguay players who are famous in worldwide.
>>>On that day, not only famous Korean players will be playing but the opposing team\'s star players will also participate.
4. I\'m looking forward to this friday because we have few chances to see those players on my eyes (directly).
>>>I\'m looking forward to Friday because we have few chances to see these players in person.
5. So, I will take pictures of them with my camera on that day.
>>>CORRECT!

OR>>>I\'ll make sure to take lots of pictures of these players with my camera on the said date.
 6. If I succeed in taking pictures of them, I will upload it on next writing assignment!

>>>If I succeed in taking pictures of them, I will upload it on my next writing assignment!

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