10/1 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear student! A happy Friday afternoon to you!^^
Thank you for allotting some time to write all these down.
Of course, thank you for sending them in for correction.^^
If you have some questions, do raise them in class and let us try to sort everything out then.
May you continue to have a great day!^^
See you later and hopefully, you will share more about your great moments with your friends.^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
1) I gave her the letter.
>>Correct!
2) Are those your trainers?
>>Correct!
3) Ken has cut his finger.
>>Correct!
4) The children finished their game.
>>Correct!
5) The hotel has its own swimming pool.
>>Correct!
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Hello!
>>Correct!
How was your holiday? ^0^
>>Correct!
Oct 2th was anniversary of the founding of our academy.
>>It was the foundation day of our academy last October 2.
So I went to my school and met my friends joined in Club.
>>So I went to my school and met my friends who joined the club.
(the name is Cinemation)
>>Correct
OR >> The club\'s name is \"CINEMATION\".
It\'s been a while, so I spent wonderful time with them.
>>It\'s been a while since we last met, so I spent/had a wonderful time with them.
That\'s why I postponed the class. ^^;
>>Correct ^^
On Oct 3rd, I met my friend.
>>Correct
OR >> I met my friend last October 3.
She bought for me sushi as a dinner.
>>She bought sushi for dinner.
After we had great meal, we went to singing rooms.
>>After having a great meal, we went to a singing room. [noraebang]^^
We shoughted and crowded to make high notes.
>>We all shouted on top of our voices.
>> We shouted to reach the high notes.
It was so excited!
>>It was so exciting!^^
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