10/1 homework

2013-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1) I gave her the letter. 2) Are those your trainers? 3) Ken has cut his finger. 4) The children finished their game. 5) The hotel has its own swimming pool. ===================================================== Hello! How was your holiday? ^0^ Oct 2th was anniversary of the founding of our academy. So I went to my school and met my friends joined in Club. (the name is Cinemation) It's been a while, so I spent wonderful time with them. That's why I postponed the class. ^^; On Oct 3rd, I met my friend. She bought for me sushi as a dinner. After we had great meal, we went to singing rooms. We shoughted and crowded to make high notes. It was so excited!

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear student! A happy Friday afternoon to you!^^
Thank you for allotting some time to write all these down.
Of course, thank you for sending them in for correction.^^
If you have some questions, do raise them in class and let us try to sort everything out then.

May you continue to have a great day!^^

See you later and hopefully, you will share more about your great moments with your friends.^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
1) I gave her the letter.

>>Correct!
2) Are those your trainers?

>>Correct!
3) Ken has cut his finger.

>>Correct!
4) The children finished their game.

>>Correct!
5) The hotel has its own swimming pool.
>>Correct!
=====================================================
Hello!

>>Correct!
How was your holiday? ^0^

>>Correct!
Oct 2th was anniversary of the founding of our academy.

>>It was the foundation day of our academy last October 2.
So I went to my school and met my friends joined in Club.

>>So I went to my school and met my friends who joined the club.

(the name is Cinemation)

>>Correct

OR >> The club\'s name is \"CINEMATION\".
It\'s been a while, so I spent wonderful time with them.

>>It\'s been a while since we last met, so I spent/had a wonderful time with them.
That\'s why I postponed the class. ^^;
>>Correct  ^^
On Oct 3rd, I met my friend.

>>Correct

OR >> I met my friend last October 3.

She bought for me sushi as a dinner.
>>She bought sushi for dinner.

After we had great meal, we went to singing rooms.

>>After having a great meal, we went to a singing room. [noraebang]^^
We shoughted and crowded to make high notes.

>>We all shouted on top of our voices.

>> We shouted to reach the high notes.
It was so excited!

>>It was so exciting!^^

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