10.1 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! It's the first day in October. Let's enjoy ourselves to the full. It's starting a nice fall season.
Is the installation of CCTV camera sufficient to protect your properties?
Currently, there are many cctv cameras in Korea. They help us to protect from the theft and the crime. On the other hand, many people worry about invading their privacy. but I think that the installation of cctv camera is necessary for our safety and they can protect our properties.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Time really flies very fast! It\'s already October. Let\'s embrace this new month and grab all opportunites for our success. Enjoy the nice weather in fall season. Take care and see you tomorrow.
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! It\'s the first day in October.
>> Correct.
Let\'s enjoy ourselves to the full.
>> Let\'s enjoy ourselves to the fullest.
It\'s starting a nice fall season.>> It\'s the start of a nice fall season.Is the installation of CCTV camera sufficient to protect your properties?Currently, there are many cctv cameras in Korea.
>> Correct.
They help us to protect from the theft and the crime.
>> They protect us from theft and the crimes.
On the other hand, many people worry about invading their privacy.
>> On the other hand, many people worry about the invasion of their privacy.
but I think that the installation of cctv camera is necessary for our safety and they can protect our properties.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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