10.1 Homework

2015-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! Are holidays really relaxing? What stressful things are involved in going on holiday? When your holiday is finished are you glad to get back to work or do you dread it? Why? Yes, they were really relaxing last Chuseok holidays. Some stressful things? Haha, I was stressed out because of my wife. I wished for just rest the holidays doing something what I wanted to do, but my wife didn't love doing like that. We had an argument about that matter. I was going to read some books and study English, but she would like to go out somewhere. I was afraid of traffic congestion during the holidays. Today, I got back to work and I am so glad to meet my coworkers again. I think that it is really a relief to have a job being able to work. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Too bad the holiday is over. On the other hand, it\'s great to know that you were able to relax, too. I think that your wife is outgoing.^^ She is very active.^^ Anyway, I hope that youa re having fun at work. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct.Are holidays really relaxing? What stressful things are involved in going on holiday?When your holiday is finished are you glad to get back to work or do you dread it? Why?Yes, they were really relaxing last Chuseok holidays. >> Yes, they are really relaxing especially last Chuseok holiday. Some stressful things? Haha, I was stressed out because of my wife. >> Correct. I wished for just rest the holidays doing something what I wanted to do, but my wife didn\'t love doing like that. >> I wished to just rest during the holidays doing something that I wanted to do but my wife didn\'t like what I enjoy doing. We had an argument about that matter. >> Correct. I was going to read some books and study English, but she would like to go out somewhere. >> I wanted to read some books and study English, but she would like to go out somewhere. I was afraid of traffic congestion during the holidays. >> Correct. Today, I got back to work and I am so glad to meet my coworkers again. >> Correct. I think that it is really a relief to have a job, being able to work. >> Correct. >> or: I think that it is really a relief to have a job and being able to work.Thank you! >> Correct.

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