10/10 homework

2018-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What is stress? What are the things you do to deal with stress?] I think stress is something stimulate the brain or heart. I heard psychologically stress includes both of pleasurable and bad feeling. If it can change my emotion, it is stress. When I feel bad stress, usually I have a beer. This is not good way, but, It is simple and fast solution. I told me it will be okay, just forget it with beer. In addition, I tell about my emotion or bad events to someone such as my husband or friends. After long talk with them, my feeling is much better. On the other hand, When I feel good stress like a project success or publication of my paper, I make more bigger dream. It makes me better.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it so much! ^ ^  People have different levels and kinds of stress, and they also deal with them differently. I have to agree with you that one way of dealing or coping with stress is talking to others and sharing your thoughts and problems with them.  But, my opinion differs with you with drinking. They say that drinking alcohol should be avoided, it may seem helpful at first but in the long run they create additional problems and may possibly increase the stress more. But; I guess, one bottle of beer won\'t hurt. ^ ^ 

-Teacher Jedah


I think stress is something stimulate the brain or heart.

>>I think stress is something that stimulates our brain or heart.
I heard psychologically stress includes both of pleasurable and bad feeling.

>>I heard that psychological stress includes pleasurable and bad feelings.
If it can change my emotion, it is stress.

>>If there is one thing that changes my emotion, that is stress. 
When I feel bad stress, usually I have a beer.

>>When I feel a negative stress, I usually have a bottle of beer. 
This is not good way, but, It is simple and fast solution.

>>This is not a good way to deal with stress, but it\'s simple and a fast remedy. 
I told me it will be okay, just forget it with beer.

>>I tell myself that everything will be okay just forget it over a bottle of beer.
In addition, I tell about my emotion or bad events to someone such as my husband or friends.

>>Correct
After long talk with them, my feeling is much better.

>>After a long talk with them, I feel much better.
On the other hand, When I feel good stress like a project success or publication of my paper, I make more bigger dream.

>>On the other hand, when I feel a positive kind of stress like success in a project or publication of my paper, I make a much bigger dream.
It makes me better.

>>Correct or

>>It makes me feel better. 

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