10/10 homework
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[Would you rather have a golden voice or a silver tongue?]
I prefer to have a silver tongue than a golden voice.
I know that logical speaking is very difficult to convince others.
Although I like listening to the song with a golden voice, I think that a silver tongue is more important to live.
I met the kind of person.
They speak logically and I agree with them at the end of talking.
My husband is also that kind of person.
I am not the kind of person.
My voice tone is a little high.
When I was younger, I don\'t like my voice tone because I thought the undertone is attractive.
However, I changed my thought that what you say is more important than what tone you say.
So nowadays, I like my voice tone.
I heard on Youtube that reading books enhances a speaking skill.
So, I read a book every day even 20 minutes.
I hope to get a silver tongue in the near future.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I appreciate it a lot! ^^
The power to convince people with whatever you say is a gift and not everyone has it. I\'m not sure but I guess politicians and salesmen kind of have silver tongues. It\'s so easy for them to make people believe in them and sell what they sell! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
I know that logical speaking is very difficult to convince others.
I know that logical speaking is very difficult to convince others.
>>I know that it is difficult to convince others just by words.
Although I like listening to the song with a golden voice, I think that a silver tongue is more important to live.
Although I like listening to the song with a golden voice, I think that a silver tongue is more important to live.
>>Although I like listening to a person with a golden voice, I think that having a silver tongue is more important.
I met the kind of person.
I met the kind of person.
>>I have met that kind of person.
They speak logically and I agree with them at the end of talking.
They speak logically and I agree with them at the end of talking.
>>They speak well and logically and they got me convinced after we were done talking.
My husband is also that kind of person.
My husband is also that kind of person.
>>CORRECT
I am not the kind of person.
I am not the kind of person.
>>CORRECT
My voice tone is a little high.
My voice tone is a little high.
>>CORRECT
When I was younger, I don\'t like my voice tone because I thought the undertone is attractive.
When I was younger, I don\'t like my voice tone because I thought the undertone is attractive.
>>CORRECT
However, I changed my thought that what you say is more important than what tone you say.
However, I changed my thought that what you say is more important than what tone you say.
>>However, I changed my belief and I now think that what you say is more important than your tone.
So nowadays, I like my voice tone.
So nowadays, I like my voice tone.
>>CORRECT
I heard on Youtube that reading books enhances a speaking skill.
I heard on Youtube that reading books enhances a speaking skill.
>>I heard/watched on YouTube that reading books enhances ones speaking skill.
So, I read a book every day even 20 minutes.
So, I read a book every day even 20 minutes.
>>So, I read a book every day even for only 20 minutes.
I hope to get a silver tongue in the near future.
I hope to get a silver tongue in the near future.
>>CORRECT
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