10. 11 Homework

2017-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

학생이 쓴 원문

Directions: Explain the proverb using complete sentences. Proverb: "Better late than never." When I was 22 years old, I was a student of Nusing University. I thought I'm not appropriate for nursing. I love works which are considered my opinions but nursing work requires very definite procedure. Also I like to sleep at night but nursing work sometimes requires not to sleep at night. So I wanted to change my future job. But I thought it was late for changing my major. I already spent a lot of money at nursing University for 2 years and It is certain to spend a lot of money and time to change my major. But! I really want to be a elementary school teacher instead of nurse so I enter the Daegu National University of Education in Korea at 25 in 2016. I'm 5 years older than my classmastes but I think "Better late than never." I'm so satisfied with my decision.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, [이름]!!:)
How are you doing this Friday?
Very good in doing your homework.
I also think that you made a good decision by following your passion.
I will see you later.

~T.Lorna^^

When I was 22 years old, I was a student of Nusing University. 
>> When I was 22 years old, I studied Nursing at a university. 
I thought I\'m not appropriate for nursing. 
>> I thought nursing is not appropriate for me.
I love works which are considered my opinions but nursing work requires very definite procedure. 
>> I love doing something that requires my opinions but nursing requires a definite procedure.
Also I like to sleep at night but nursing work sometimes requires not to sleep at night. 
>> I also like to sleep at night but nursing requires me to work during the night sometimes.
So I wanted to change my future job.
>> That\'s why I wanted to change my major.
 But I thought it was late for changing my major. 
>> I thought it was late to change my major.
I already spent a lot of money at nursing University for 2 years and It is certain to spend a lot of money and time to change my major. 
>> I already spent a lot of money studying nursing for two years and it is also certain that I should spend money and time to change my major.
But! I really want to be a elementary school teacher instead of nurse so I enter the Daegu National University of Education in Korea at 25 in 2016. 
>> But I really want to become an elementary school teacher and not to become a nurse that\'s why I enrolled at Daegu National University here in Korea last 2016 at the age of 25.
I\'m 5 years older than my classmastes but I think \"Better late than never.\" 
>> I am 5 years older than my classmates but I think it is \'better late than never\'.
I\'m so satisfied with my decision.
>> Correct! 

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