10/11 homework

2018-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[How have standards of beauty changed over the years?] The standards of beauty is trendy. It change every year and circled with some period. I think the trend is affected from celebrities. Some famous people such as singer and actress makes trend. After a celebrity wear cloth in TV, it becomes very famous to general public. I found 90's photo for general fashion in some street in a newspaper. It was amazing, because the style of people was not extremely different nowadays. I realized at that time about the recirculation of fassion.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending time with your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^ I see that you have a different perception about beauty. You focused with your opinion with fashion and not with the physical beauty. You gave good thoughts on this one. I have to agree with you. I guess when it comes to fashion and clothes, they\'re actually going around. What we actually had in the 80\'s or 90\'s are also what we have today. When I was in high school school, torn jeans were called tattered jeans, they look the same as today only they are called distressed jeans! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



The standards of beauty is trendy.

>>Correct
It change every year and circled with some period.

>>It changes every time but comes back at a certain period. (I hope this is what you mean with your sentence.)
I think the trend is affected from celebrities.

>>I think celebrities have a great influence with the trend. 
Some famous people such as singer and actress makes trend.

>>Some famous people such as singers and actresses make the trend. 
After a celebrity wear cloth in TV, it becomes very famous to general public.

>>After a celebrity wears certain clothes on TV, it becomes very popular to the general public.
I found 90\'s photo for general fashion in some street in a newspaper.

>>I found 90\'s photos for general fashion in some streets in a newspaper.
It was amazing, because the style of people was not extremely different nowadays.

>>It was amazing, because the styles of the people were not extremely different nowadays. 
I realized at that time about the recirculation of fassion.

>>I realized at that time about the revolution of fashion. or

>>I realized that fashion is revolutionary. 

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