10/11 homework
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[What would be the top five reasons why you would decide to divorce your husband?]
I don\'t want to divorce my husband.
I hope to happy with my husband as long as possible.
But, if I think about divorce in the future, it will be caused by the absence of conversation.
I think the most important thing for a happy life is a conversation.
We have a lot of differences between us.
It makes us happy and unfortunately and the conversation helps us to find good relationship.
And another reason would be love.
I think saying love is very important.
If I feel we do not love, I don\'t have any reason to live him.
And, If I would decide to divorce, I should think about me myself.
I think marriage with different men will not so different.
I heard that personal character is also very important to the relationship.
Sometimes we argue with each other, but I think my husband is better than me.
So, before the decision to divorce, I have to think very carefully for a long time.
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>>CORRECT
I hope to happy with my husband as long as possible.
I hope to happy with my husband as long as possible.
>>I hope to be happy with my husband as long as possible.
But, if I think about divorce in the future, it will be caused by the absence of conversation.
But, if I think about divorce in the future, it will be caused by the absence of conversation.
>>But, if I would think about divorce, the reason will be the absence of communication.
I think the most important thing for a happy life is a conversation.
I think the most important thing for a happy life is a conversation.
>>I think the most important thing for a happy life is communication.
We have a lot of differences between us.
We have a lot of differences between us.
>>We have a lot of differences.
It makes us happy and unfortunately and the conversation helps us to find good relationship.
It makes us happy and unfortunately and the conversation helps us to find good relationship.
>>Unfortunately, we have a lot of differences, but communication helps us establish a good relationship.
And another reason would be love.
And another reason would be love.
>>CORRECT
I think saying love is very important.
I think saying love is very important.
>>I think saying \"I love you\" is important.
If I feel we do not love, I don\'t have any reason to live him.
If I feel we do not love, I don\'t have any reason to live him.
>>If I feel that we don\'t love each other any more, then that would be a reason for divorce.
And, If I would decide to divorce, I should think about me myself.
And, If I would decide to divorce, I should think about me myself.
>>And, if I would decide to divorce, I should think about myself.
I think marriage with different men will not so different.
I think marriage with different men will not so different.
>>I think marriage with different men will not be so different.
I heard that personal character is also very important to the relationship.
I heard that personal character is also very important to the relationship.
>>CORRECT
Sometimes we argue with each other, but I think my husband is better than me.
Sometimes we argue with each other, but I think my husband is better than me.
>>CORRECT
So, before the decision to divorce, I have to think very carefully for a long time.
So, before the decision to divorce, I have to think very carefully for a long time.
>>CORRECT
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