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2010-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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When someone hands me my change, I usually count it and make sure it’s the right amount. Because someone can be confused counting or the shape of money. (Korean \ 5000 bill is very similar to \50,000, so I had a memory for paying \50,000 instead of \ 5000.) To check the change is correct makes you very inconvenient. But most people can do mistake counting change. And if you have developed this habit, it will help you when you have something to be needed accuracy.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

That is a very good realization. What you said is right about 

counting your change. I also do that whenever I buy something.

Here are the corrections I noticed.

Have a happy happy Tuesday!!

Teacher Verna 

When someone hands me my change, I usually count it and make sure it’s the right amount.

>>> Correct.
Because someone can be confused counting or the shape of money.

>>> Because someone can get confused counting or with the value of the money.

 (Korean 5000 bill is very similar to 50,000, so I had a memory for paying 50,000 instead of 5000.)

>>> (The 5,000 Korean bill is very similar to 50,000, so I remembered paying 50,000 instead of 5,000.)
To check the change is correct makes you very inconvenient.

>>> Checking if your change is exact is very inconvenient.

But most people can do mistake counting change.

>>> But most people make mistakes when counting change.
And if you have developed this habit, it will help you when you have something to be needed accuracy.

>>> And if you develop this habit, it will help when you have to be accurate at something.

 

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