10/12 homework
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Hello [이름],
That is a very good realization. What you said is right about
counting your change. I also do that whenever I buy something.
Here are the corrections I noticed.
Have a happy happy Tuesday!!
Teacher Verna
When someone hands me my change, I usually count it and make sure it’s the right amount.
>>> Correct.
Because someone can be confused counting or the shape of money.
>>> Because someone can get confused counting or with the value of the money.
(Korean 5000 bill is very similar to 50,000, so I had a memory for paying 50,000 instead of 5000.)
>>> (The 5,000 Korean bill is very similar to 50,000, so I remembered paying 50,000 instead of 5,000.)
To check the change is correct makes you very inconvenient.
>>> Checking if your change is exact is very inconvenient.
But most people can do mistake counting change.
>>> But most people make mistakes when counting change.
And if you have developed this habit, it will help you when you have something to be needed accuracy.
>>> And if you develop this habit, it will help when you have to be accurate at something.
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