10.12 Homework

2015-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good afternoon! I have a bad news today. I was fired last week, so I am at home now. I was confusing and frustrating about that, but I am okay. I will get a good new job soon. I would like to rest and think through the end of this year. 1) I don't know why she is angry with me. 2) He said that I should make another attempt. 3) She asked me why I was late. 4) I couldn't help laughing. 5) There are many benefits of living alone. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing a perfect job on your homework. Anyway, I am sorry to hear about your situation. But, I admire your optimism. I am sure that, with your talent, skill and experiences, you can find a new job soon. Let\'s be positive. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.I have a bad news today. >> Correct. I was fired last week, so I am at home now. >> Correct.I was confusing and frustrating about that, but I am okay. >> I was confused and frustrated because of that, but I am okay now. I will get a good new job soon. >> Correct. I would like to rest and think through the end of this year. >> Correct.1) I don\'t know why she is angry with me. >> Correct.2) He said that I should make another attempt. >> Correct.3) She asked me why I was late. >> Correct.4) I couldn\'t help laughing. >> Correct.5) There are many benefits of living alone. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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