10/12 homework

2018-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Describe a place you will never forget] I went to Hawaii with my husband for a Honeymoon. We enjoy for two weeks in there. It was great. We relaxed and just enjoy the life without any concerns. I did swimming a lot in a pool and ocean. If I have a baby later, I want to go there again. Sometimes, when I argue with my husband, I remind the happy memory in Hawaii.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks again for accomplishing your homework! I could just imagine how wonderful it is in Hawaii just by what you have shared here! Imagine, you can forget about a bad day just thinking about your happy memories in Hawaii! Awesome! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I went to Hawaii with my husband for a Honeymoon.

>>I went to Hawaii with my husband for a honeymoon.  (correct sentence, no need to capitalize \"honeymoon.\")
We enjoy for two weeks in there.

>>We enjoyed two weeks there. 
It was great.

>>Correct
We relaxed and just enjoy the life without any concerns.

>>We relaxed and just enjoyed life without any concerns. 
I did swimming a lot in a pool and ocean.

>>I did a lot of swimming at the pool and at the ocean. 
If I have a baby later, I want to go there again.

>>If I will have a baby in the future, I would want to go there again.
Sometimes, when I argue with my husband, I remind the happy memory in Hawaii.

>>Sometimes, when I have an argument with my husband, I just remind myself about our happy memories in Hawaii.

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