10/12 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thanks again for accomplishing your homework! I could just imagine how wonderful it is in Hawaii just by what you have shared here! Imagine, you can forget about a bad day just thinking about your happy memories in Hawaii! Awesome! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I went to Hawaii with my husband for a Honeymoon.
>>I went to Hawaii with my husband for a honeymoon. (correct sentence, no need to capitalize \"honeymoon.\")
We enjoy for two weeks in there.
>>We enjoyed two weeks there.
It was great.
>>Correct
We relaxed and just enjoy the life without any concerns.
>>We relaxed and just enjoyed life without any concerns.
I did swimming a lot in a pool and ocean.
>>I did a lot of swimming at the pool and at the ocean.
If I have a baby later, I want to go there again.
>>If I will have a baby in the future, I would want to go there again.
Sometimes, when I argue with my husband, I remind the happy memory in Hawaii.
>>Sometimes, when I have an argument with my husband, I just remind myself about our happy memories in Hawaii.
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