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Homework !!
In my opinion ,the school is not just for eucating knowlege. Human being should live inspiring from movies, music, and sports. Although we don't play instrument well, it is very important to listen to music well. So it could be better to know basic knoledge about music.
In addition, the school has to educate about morals and sociality to the students.
So if the schools educated only for knoledge without art,music,physical education, and morals, they would have trained the students as robots good at calculating.
And Erine could you give me some advices for preparing Opic?
Are quetions fixed at every test?
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Good moring, [이름]!^^Here are the corrections for your homework yesterday. If you have some questions, feel free to ask me.Regarding your concern about OPIC, questions are not really fixed. If I am not mistaken, you should need to take a Background Survey. The Background Survey is a questionnaire which elicits information about the test taker’s work, school, home, personal activities and interests. The test taker completes the survey and the answers determine the pool of topics from which the computer will randomly select questions. The variety of topics, the types of questions, and the range of possible combinations the computer can generate allow for individually designed interviews. Even if two test takers selected the same combination of Background Survey responses, the resulting test would not be the same. See you again tomorrow!~~Teacher Erine~~
Homework !!In my opinion ,the school is not just for eucating knowlege. >> In my opinion, school is not just for educating knowledge.
Human being should live inspiring from movies, music, and sports.
>> Human being should live being inspired by movies, music and sports.
Although we don\'t play instrument well, it is very important to listen to music well.
>> Correct
So it could be better to know basic knoledge about music.
>> So it could be better to know basic knowledge about music. In addition, the school has to educate about morals and sociality to the students.
>> In addition, school has to educate students about morals and sociality. So if the schools educated only for knoledge without art,music,physical education, and morals, they would have trained the students as robots good at calculating.
>> So if the school educated only knowledge without art, music, physical education, and morals, they would train students as robots who are good at calculating. And Erine could you give me some advices for preparing Opic?
>> And Erine, could you give me some advices in preparation for OPIC?Are quetions fixed at every test?
>> Correct
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