10/14 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I meet someone first and talk with him/her about a few minutes, I apprehend his/her personality in some degree.
First impression always matches someone\'s real charecteristics, but I think it matches more than 90%.
Surely, I try not to evaluate the person as first impression, because It\'s not always right and I couldn\'t see the postive point of them if I treat them with biased views.
Then, what aspects decide first impression?
How they dress up and express are important to decide the first impression.
So, if I first meet someone, I used to dress up well and smile.
Tone, gesture and attitude during chatting are also critical point.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Dr. [이름]!
I totally agree with all of your points. Creating a great first impression is a make or break. It is wise to always put our best foot forward since there may never be a second time to create another good impression.
I made some insertions to some of your sentences. Kindly go over them well. As usual, your sentences contain well-chosen words, ideas, and is packed with information.
Thank you for answering your homework always. See you soon!
-T. Donna~
>> When I meet someone for the first and talk with him/her about a few minutes, I comprehend his/her personality in some degree.
First impression always matches someone\'s real charecteristics, but I think it matches more than 90%.
>> Correct!
Surely, I try not to evaluate the person as first impression, because It\'s not always right and I couldn\'t see the postive point of them if I treat them with biased views.
>> Surely, I try not to evaluate a person for the first impression, because It\'s not always right and I couldn\'t see the postive points of them if I treat them with a biased views.
>> Surely, I try not to evaluate a person at first impression, because It\'s not always right and I couldn\'t see their postive points if I treat them with a biased views.
Then, what aspects decide first impression?
>> Then, what aspects can we decide on a first impression?
How they dress up and express are important to decide the first impression.
>> Correct!
So, if I first meet someone, I used to dress up well and smile.
>> So, if I first meet someone, I dress up well and smile.
Tone, gesture and attitude during chatting are also critical point.
>> Tone, gesture, and attitude during chat are also critical points.
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