10/14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you go back to the same place again for vacation? Why or why not?
--> I would go to Vietnam again if i could, because my summer vacation there was very wonderful.
It was my first oversease trip with my mother, and Vietnam trip was really relaxing.
For example, I got a masagge, enjoyed the sea view, and swimming at hotel.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ha Na!
Great job with your homework. Hopefully, you can visit Vietnam again soon. Just take note of spelling when writing, like \'overseas\' and \'massage\', and also past tense like \'swam\'.
- T. Caitlyn
I would go to Vietnam again if i could, because my summer vacation there was very wonderful.
>> I would go to Vietnam again if I could because my summer vacation there was wonderful.
It was my first oversease trip with my mother, and Vietnam trip was really relaxing.
It was my first oversease trip with my mother, and Vietnam trip was really relaxing.
>> It was my first overseas trip with my mother, and the Vietnam trip was really relaxing.
For example, I got a masagge, enjoyed the sea view, and swimming at hotel.
For example, I got a masagge, enjoyed the sea view, and swimming at hotel.
>> For example, I got a massage, enjoyed the sea view, and swam at the hotel.
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