10.14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! I just returned from my outside of the office work.
Is fashion important?
Yes.I think fashion is important. [이름] people looks great wearing just around anything.
I think that we should wear clothes very well when we are getting old.I am normally a pretty good dresser and I am interested in fashion.I usually work very hard to look in good shape. I am a gentleman.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in. Stay cool and fashionable. kkk
Have a nice day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
I just returned from my outside of the office work.>> I just returned to my office.Is fashion important?Yes. I think fashion is important.
>> Correct.
[이름] people looks great wearing just around anything.
>> Did you mean: [이름] people looks great wearing trendy clothes.I think that we should wear clothes very well when we are getting old.
>> I think that we should dress up well especially as we get old.
I am normally a pretty good dresser and I am interested in fashion.
>> I am a pretty good dresser and I am interested in fashion.
I usually work very hard to look in good shape.
>> I usually work out very hard to be in good shape.
I am a gentleman.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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