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[If you were in a position of power, do you think you would be corrupt?]
Even if I were in a position, I would be never corrupt because I am a super timid person.
I think there are many kinds of corruption.
Something is a very small corruption like the printing of private things in the workplace.
But, something is very serious like spend on the official budget secretly to buy private one.
I think a big corruption can not occur suddenly.
If someone has made a big corruption, he/she did so many small corruption already.
There is a proverb \"He that will steal a pin will steal an ox\".
I absolutely agree with that.
If I passed for the wrong thing, I will do a bigger one.
So, the prevention of corruption should be performed in advance.
Preventive education should be offered and the person discovered interruption has to be punished very strongly.
So, candidates of interruption think that I don\'t want to like the person.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this homework. I really appreciate it! ^^
I like the points you have stated here. Punishment mus be imposed to those who are corrupt! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
Even if I were in a position, I would be never corrupt because I am a super timid person.
>>Even if I were in a position, I would never be corrupt because I am a super timid person.
I think there are many kinds of corruption.
I think there are many kinds of corruption.
>>CORRECT
Something is a very small corruption like the printing of private things in the workplace.
Something is a very small corruption like the printing of private things in the workplace.
>>A small act of corruption is when you print some private things in the workplace.
But, something is very serious like spend on the official budget secretly to buy private one.
But, something is very serious like spend on the official budget secretly to buy private one.
>>But, something that is very serious is when you spend an official budget for personal reasons.
I think a big corruption can not occur suddenly.
I think a big corruption can not occur suddenly.
>>CORRECT
If someone has made a big corruption, he/she did so many small corruption already.
If someone has made a big corruption, he/she did so many small corruption already.
>>If someone has made a big corruption, he/she has already committed small acts of corruption.
There is a proverb \"He that will steal a pin will steal an ox\".
There is a proverb \"He that will steal a pin will steal an ox\".
>>CORRECT
I absolutely agree with that.
I absolutely agree with that.
>>CORRECT
If I passed for the wrong thing, I will do a bigger one.
If I passed for the wrong thing, I will do a bigger one.
>>If I succeeded committing small wrong doings, I will definitely be inclined to commit bigger ones.
So, the prevention of corruption should be performed in advance.
>>CORRECT
Preventive education should be offered and the person discovered interruption has to be punished very strongly.
Preventive education should be offered and the person discovered interruption has to be punished very strongly.
>>Preventive education should be part of the curriculum and the person guilty of such crime must be punished accordingly.
So, candidates of interruption think that I don\'t want to like the person.
So, candidates of interruption think that I don\'t want to like the person.
>>So that candidates would know that people wouldn\'t like a corrupt person.
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