10.15 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! It's a nice wednesday. Have a good day!
How can we teach our children good behavior? Are words or example more important?
Yes. I think that we should play and talk with our children earnestly.We should be respectful of their personality,too.I used to play ball game with my son when he was [이름]er.He still remember the precious memory until now.He always appreciate me to play with him at that time. I think these all help our children to be good behavior.I think that I might have to talk with my kids more frequently from now on.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!!!
I\'m really glad because you have a very good relationship with your family. Stay happy always and have more fun memories with your family.
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It\'s a nice wednesday. Have a good day!>> Correct!!!
*** WednesdayHow can we teach our children good behavior? Are words or example more important?Yes. I think that we should play and talk with our children earnestly.
>> Correct!!!
We should be respectful of their personality,too.
>> We should be respectful of their personalities, too.
>> We should respect their individual characteristics, too.
I used to play ball game with my son when he was [이름]er.
>> I used to play ballgames with my son when he was [이름]er.
He still remember the precious memory until now.
>> He still remembers that precious memory until now.
He always appreciate me to play with him at that time.
>> He always appreciates when I played with him at that time.
I think these all help our children to be good behavior.
>> I thnk all of these things shaped our children\'s good behavior.
I think that I might have to talk with my kids more frequently from now on.>> I think that I have to talk with my kids more frequently from now on.Thank you!
>> Correct!!!
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