10.15 homework
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me what season your country is in right now.
It\'s already autumn in my country right now. It started to get cold and a little bit cool breeze. Most of the time, it\'s not so hot and not so cold. I used to have my jumper like long thick garment in case of having cold because the temperature gets lower at night. Most of all, I need to be careful of having cold. One of the things i look forward to most about autumn is the part where i can appreciate the beauty of nature with colorful scenery.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Tell me what season your country is in right now.
It\'s already autumn in my country right now.
>> It\'s already autumn in my country.
It started to get cold and a little bit cool breeze.
>> It started to get cold and have a little bit of cool breeze.
Most of the time, it\'s not so hot and not so cold.
>> correct
I used to have my jumper like long thick garment in case of having cold because the temperature gets lower at night.
>> I wear my jumper to avoid catching a cold because the temperature gets lower at night.
Most of all, I need to be careful of having cold.
>> Most of all, I need to be careful of catching a cold.
One of the things i look forward to most about autumn is the part where i can appreciate the beauty of nature with colorful scenery.
>> One of the things I look forward to in autumn is the part where I can appreciate the beauty of nature with colorful scenery.
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