10.16 Homework

2014-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! The weather is dull today. I kindly ask you,please don't mind for my improvement of English skill. I just enjoy learning English.I am sure that it will grow well in time. Let's just enjoy our time. I think that it will give us a new present like speaking ability in English. How do you act when you are happy. Do you like being around happy people? I often dance and drink some beers to celebrate it when I am happy. I really like even small happiness around me.I like being around happy people,too. I think that if someone has more positive mind,he will be more blessed. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Don\'t worry, I won\'t mind your English skills anymore. If you want to enjoy, you can speak freely during our class. Thank you! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! The weather is dull today. >> Correct. I kindly ask you,please don\'t mind for my improvement of English skill. >> Please, don\'t worry about how I can improve my English skills. I just enjoy learning English. >> Correct. I am sure that it will grow well in time. >> I am sure that it will improve in time. Let\'s just enjoy our time. >> Correct. I think that it will give us a new present like speaking ability in English. >> I think that it will make me improve my speaking ability.How do you act when you are happy. Do you like being around happy people?I often dance and drink some beers to celebrate it when I am happy. >> I often dance and drink some beer to celebrate when I am happy.   I really like even small happiness around me. >> I really enjoy being happy with simple things around me. I like being around happy people,too. >> Correct. I think that if someone has more positive mind,he will be more blessed. >> I think that if someone has a more positive mind, he will be more blessed. Thank you! >> Correct.

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