10. 16 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the questions using complete sentences not more than 10.
Question: Do you think a boy should pay for everything on a date? WHy? Why not?
I don't think so. Actually, I have a boyfriend and we use a date checkcard. Before we meet, we transfer same amount of money to our date bankbook. Because we are both students, we both don't have much money, we pay the date expenses samely. If one of us work earlierthan the other one, the one who works will be able to pay more.
My mom always says, "If a man love a woman, they will pay all date expenses. Don't meet a man who don't pay all the money." Wow... my mom has so different thoughts with me. Why should a boy pay for everything? We are equal people. Women and men both work thesedays. They both have ability to live by themselves. I disagree with my mom.
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>> Correct!
OR:
>> I don\'t think so that a boy should pay for everything on a date.
Actually, I have a boyfriend and we use a date checkcard.
>> I actually have a boyfriend a we use a check card during our date.
Before we meet, we transfer same amount of money to our date bankbook.
>> Before we meet, we transfer the same amount of money to our date bankbook.
Because we are both students, we both don\'t have much money, we pay the date expenses samely.
>> We are both students so we don\'t have much money that\'s why we share the expenses on our date equally.
If one of us work earlierthan the other one, the one who works will be able to pay more.
>> If one of us will work earlier than the other one then the one who works will pay more.
My mom always says, \"If a man love a woman, they will pay all date expenses. Don\'t meet a man who don\'t pay all the money.\"
My mom always says, \"If a man love a woman, they will pay all date expenses. Don\'t meet a man who don\'t pay all the money.\"
>> My mom always say that \'If a man loves a woman then they usually pay all the date expenses so don\'t meet with a man who won\'t pay all the expenses\".
Wow... my mom has so different thoughts with me.
>>My mom have different thoughts with me.
Why should a boy pay for everything?
>> Correct!
We are equal people.
>> Correct!
Women and men both work thesedays.
>> Women and men both work these days.
They both have ability to live by themselves.
>> They both have the ability to live by themselves.
I disagree with my mom.
>> Correct!
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