10/17
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,T.Maria!!
Now I am in the train as you know. This train is very fast but seats are really uncomfortable.
So I dislike to get on this train. However, I have no choice to arrive at home more fastly.
My family have not any plan utill now. But something will be occured tommorrow.
Please have fun according to your plan. I will also do my unscheduled plan.
Oh my god. If u can not use the internet, how do you get the news or any information?
Of course, the development of technolagy is not totally to have benefits for human' life. Do you agree that??
Hm.. It is almost 22:00 o'clock so I feel a little tired but I couldn't sleep because .....
See you on monday!!!^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!!
Thank you for taking the time to write this. I hope you will have a very
good one this weekend. Yes I could hear the sound of the train. It sounds
interesting though. You know, we don\'t use train in our area. We just
use the jeep. I\'m pretty sure you saw one. Ha ha. Of course we still use the internet
to be updated with current events.^^ See you on Monday. Take care.
God bless you and your family.
~T.Maria~
Hi,T.Maria!!
>> Correct
Now I am in the train as you know.
>> As you know I am in the train now
This train is very fast but seats are really uncomfortable.
>> This train is very fast but the seats are really uncomfortable.
So I dislike to get on this train.
>> Correct
However, I have no choice to arrive at home more fastly.
>> However, I have no choice but to arrive home faster.
My family have not any plan utill now.
>> My family had no plans until now.
But something will be occured tommorrow.
>> But something will occur tomorrow.
Please have fun according to your plan.
>> Correct
I will also do my unscheduled plan.
>> Correct
Oh my god. If u can not use the internet, how do you get the news or any information?
>> Correct:you
Of course, the development of technolagy is not totally to have benefits for human\' life.
>> Correct: technology
Do you agree that??
>> Do you agree with that?
Hm.. It is almost 22:00 o\'clock so I feel a little tired but I couldn\'t sleep because .....
>> Correct
See you on monday!!!^^
>> Correct:Monday^^
Thank you for taking the time to write this. I hope you will have a very
good one this weekend. Yes I could hear the sound of the train. It sounds
interesting though. You know, we don\'t use train in our area. We just
use the jeep. I\'m pretty sure you saw one. Ha ha. Of course we still use the internet
to be updated with current events.^^ See you on Monday. Take care.
God bless you and your family.
~T.Maria~
Hi,T.Maria!!
>> Correct
Now I am in the train as you know.
>> As you know I am in the train now
This train is very fast but seats are really uncomfortable.
>> This train is very fast but the seats are really uncomfortable.
So I dislike to get on this train.
>> Correct
However, I have no choice to arrive at home more fastly.
>> However, I have no choice but to arrive home faster.
My family have not any plan utill now.
>> My family had no plans until now.
But something will be occured tommorrow.
>> But something will occur tomorrow.
Please have fun according to your plan.
>> Correct
I will also do my unscheduled plan.
>> Correct
Oh my god. If u can not use the internet, how do you get the news or any information?
>> Correct:you
Of course, the development of technolagy is not totally to have benefits for human\' life.
>> Correct: technology
Do you agree that??
>> Do you agree with that?
Hm.. It is almost 22:00 o\'clock so I feel a little tired but I couldn\'t sleep because .....
>> Correct
See you on monday!!!^^
>> Correct:Monday^^
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