10/17 HOMEWORK
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I think she or he just has to exercise. But they have to eat three bowls of rice everyday. Snacks are what they shouldn\'t eat!!!!!
강사 첨삭
Amazing tip, Zoe! ^_^ I\'m glad you\'re aware about snacks being the major cause of excessive weight gain. A lot of people mistakenly assume that cutting rice from their diet is the way to go :< Thank you so much for your answer, Zoe. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
I think she or he just has to exercise.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I think they just need to exercise.
But they have to eat three bowls of rice everyday.
>> CORRECT!
Snacks are what they shouldn\'t eat!!!!!
>> CORRECT!
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