10/17 Homework

2013-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Good morning, teacher kelly? You are so energetic every early morning.very good! Today's Homework "How do you keep yourself focused on your priorities during difficult times." Well,first I think and act in an even,commonsensically. I always think,think,think and decide priority.I keep myself focussed on the stuffs at current situation.Then I do my best. and I play silently. That is all. Thank you.sir! Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Being a director in a big company is not easy but with your principle in life you can handle everything. Thank you for sharing your philosophy in times of a difficult situation. Never give up Sir! Take care!

~t. KELLY~

Good morning, teacher Kelly!

>> Correct.

You are so energetic every early morning.very good!
>> Correct.
 Today\'s Homework
 \"How do you keep yourself focused on your priorities during difficult times.\"

 Well, first I think and act in an even, commonsensically.

>> Well, first I think and act in an even manner using my commonsense. 

I always think,think,think and decide priority.

>> I always think and decide according to my priorities.

I keep myself focused on the stuffs at current situation.

>> Correct.

Then I do my best. and I play silently.That is all.

>> Correct.
Thank you.sir!

>> Correct.

***Sir for male

*** Ma\'am for female

 Bye bye!

>> Correct.


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