10.17 Homework

2014-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good morning! I drank too much last night.I've got a hangover headache until now. Should parents be held reponsible for their children's behavior? I think that Human beings like imitation.Generally,children resemble their parents. because babies can hear and see their parents.so I think parents be held responsible for their children's behavior. Thank you! Have a nice weekend!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even if you have a hangover. I enjoyed our class even if you have a hangover.kkk Have a great weekend! ~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! I drank too much last night. I\'ve got a hangover headache until now.>> Correct!!!Should parents be held reponsible for their children\'s behavior?I think that Human beings like imitation. >> I think that human beings like imitating others. Generally, children resemble their parents. >> Correct!!! because babies can hear and see their parents. >> Correct!!! so I think parents be held responsible for their children\'s behavior.>> So I think that parents should be held responsible for their children\'s behavior.Thank you! Have a nice weekend! >> Correct!!!

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