10/18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel happy with daily simple things.
When I leave work, I used to talk to my mother on the phone.
I tell the events which happen in the hospital and my mother speak to me about news.
It\'s not a long time, but conversation with my mother gives me comfort.
On weekends, I usually sleep long time to supplement short sleep during weekdays.
After a long and deep sleep, I feel refreshed.
Also, I spend wonderful time with my family and friends during weekends.
Recently, I\'m really into a drama named \'good doctor\'.
It is about the growth of a doctor who has autism.
I watch the drama by one or two episodes every night.
This is like a gift for me who work very hard during daytime.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Dr. [이름]!
They say that the best things in world are free- conversations with your mother, sleep, some good drama, among others. If we have simple pleasures, we can always be happy. However, sometimes, big accomplishments as well make us proud and contented. As you are a young great doctor that you are, you are your parents joy and pride.
If you take a look at the suggestions I made below, there are just a few of them such as the insertion of \'a\' or \'the\', and some subject-verb agreement. Read them well.
Your composition is always full of interesting information and these are stated in an artistic way. Thanks for always honing your writing skills! Carry on.
See you soon!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Or: I am happy with simple things daily.
When I leave work, I used to talk to my mother on the phone.
>> Correct!
I tell the events which happen in the hospital and my mother speak to me about news.
I tell the events which happen in the hospital and my mother speak to me about news.
>> I tell the events which happen in the hospital and my mother speaks to me about the news.
It\'s not a long time, but conversation with my mother gives me comfort.
>> Correct!
Or: Even not for a long time, conversations with my mother give me comfort.
On weekends, I usually sleep long time to supplement short sleep during weekdays.
>> On weekends, I usually sleep for a long time to supplement the short sleep during weekdays.
After a long and deep sleep, I feel refreshed.
After a long and deep sleep, I feel refreshed.
>> Correct!
Also, I spend wonderful time with my family and friends during weekends.
Also, I spend wonderful time with my family and friends during weekends.
>> Also, I spend a wonderful time with my family and friends during weekends.
Recently, I\'m really into a drama named \'good doctor\'.
>> Correct!
Or: Recently, I\'m really into a drama named \'Good Doctor\'.
It is about the growth of a doctor who has autism.
>> Correct!
I watch the drama by one or two episodes every night.
>> Correct!
This is like a gift for me who work very hard during daytime.
>> This is like a gift for me who works very hard during daytime.
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