10/18 homework

2010-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1.I’m not a person who needs a lot of personal time. I sometimes feel that I hope to get a time to think about self reflection. But i preper to spend my time with my parents or my friends. Because when I’m in a empty space alone, I’m getting lonely. /// 2.I didn’t have any special my hero when I was a child. But I wanted to be a career woman. It means a woman who have professional mind. And a woman who has very luxury her own car and get all dressed up. But I realized that it is not easy to be a career woman who appeared in TV drama. Because I’m just a woman who working for my daily living./// 3.When I’m a devastating situation, what means a lot to me is my family. I live for my family and my family live for me, I think. I must be a lucky person to have a good family.

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Hello there [이름], Happy Monday to you. How was your weekend? I think you really love and enjoy to be with your family and friends. Let's talk about that later. Take care! Love, Verna   1.I’m not a person who needs a lot of personal time. >>Correct I sometimes feel that I hope to get a time to think about self reflection. >>Sometimes I'm hoping I should have time for self reflection. But i preper to spend my time with my parents or my friends. >>But I prefer to spend my time with my parents or my friends.  Because when I’m in a empty space alone, I’m getting lonely. /// >> Because when I'm in an empty space alone, I'm getting lonely. 2.I didn't have any special my hero when I was a child. >>I didn't have any special hero when I was a child.  But I wanted to be a career woman. >>Correct  It means a woman who have professional mind. >> It means a woman who has professional mind. And a woman who has very luxury her own car and get all dressed up.  >>And a woman who owns her very luxurious car and gets all dressed up.  But I realized that it is not easy to be a career woman to appear in TV drama. >>Correct  Because I’m just a woman who working for my daily living. >> Because I'm just a woman who's working for my daily living.3.When I’m a devastating situation, what means a lot to me is my family. >>.When I'm in a devastating situation, what means a lot to me is my family.I live for my family and my family live for me, I think.  >>I live for my family and my family lives for me too, I think.  I must be a lucky person to have a good family. >>Correct

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