10/18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.I’m not a person who needs a lot of personal time. I sometimes feel that I hope to get a time to think about self reflection.
But i preper to spend my time with my parents or my friends. Because when I’m in a empty space alone, I’m getting lonely. ///
2.I didn’t have any special my hero when I was a child. But I wanted to be a career woman. It means a woman who have professional mind.
And a woman who has very luxury her own car and get all dressed up.
But I realized that it is not easy to be a career woman who appeared in TV drama. Because I’m just a woman who working for my daily living.///
3.When I’m a devastating situation, what means a lot to me is my family.
I live for my family and my family live for me, I think. I must be a lucky person to have a good family.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Happy Monday to you. How was your weekend? I think you really love and enjoy to be with your family and friends.
Let's talk about that later. Take care!
Love,
Verna
1.I’m not a person who needs a lot of personal time.
>>Correct
I sometimes feel that I hope to get a time to think about self reflection.
>>Sometimes I'm hoping I should have time for self reflection.
But i preper to spend my time with my parents or my friends.
>>But I prefer to spend my time with my parents or my friends.
Because when I’m in a empty space alone, I’m getting lonely. ///
>> Because when I'm in an empty space alone, I'm getting lonely. 2.I didn't have any special my hero when I was a child.
>>I didn't have any special hero when I was a child.
But I wanted to be a career woman.
>>Correct
It means a woman who have professional mind.
>> It means a woman who has professional mind.
And a woman who has very luxury her own car and get all dressed up.
>>And a woman who owns her very luxurious car and gets all dressed up.
But I realized that it is not easy to be a career woman to appear in TV drama.
>>Correct
Because I’m just a woman who working for my daily living.
>> Because I'm just a woman who's working for my daily living.3.When I’m a devastating situation, what means a lot to me is my family.
>>.When I'm in a devastating situation, what means a lot to me is my family.I live for my family and my family live for me, I think.
>>I live for my family and my family lives for me too, I think.
I must be a lucky person to have a good family.
>>Correct
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