10.18 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for answering the essay question today. I think it\'s really great to retire and live in the countryside. It\'s really quiet and peaceful there. Anyway, have a great weekend. Take care~ See you on Monday!
~t. KELLY~
Well, basically I like prefer country life. because my charater is so lyric.
>> Well, basically i prefer country life because I am a poetic person.
I want to live at clean air region and take it easy.
>>
I want to live with clean air and take things easy.
My wife don\'t like it.
>>
My wife doesn\'t like it.
she is so smart and she likes department store etc.
>> She is so smart and she likes going to department stores and etc.
sometimes we argured about that.
>> Sometimes we argue about that.
>> Correct.
Today I am very busy.
>> Correct.
I have to visit my customer in Seoul and I\'ll come back late tonight.
>> Correct.
I have a reservation to play golf early tomorrow morning at 5 AM.
>> I have a reservation to play golf tomorrow at 5 AM.
On Sunday I have a graduates\' association of my high school.
>> On Sunday I have a graduates\' association with my batch mates in high school.
>> It is a terrible and hectic schedule.
See you next Monday!
>> Correct.
Have a nice weekend! Bye bye!
>> Correct.
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