10.18 Homework

2013-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Well, basically I like prefer country life. because my charater is so lyric. I want to live at clean air region and take it easy.My wife don't like it.she is so smart and she likes department store etc. sometimes we argured about that. I worry about this problem after my retirement. Today I am very busy. I have to visit my customer in seoul and I'll come back late tonight. I have a reservation to play golf early tomorrow morning at 5 AM. On Sunday Ihave a graduates'association of my high school. It is terrible hectic schdule. See you next Monday! Have a nice weekend! Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for answering the essay question today. I think it\'s really great to retire and live in the countryside. It\'s really quiet and peaceful there. Anyway, have a great weekend. Take care~ See you on Monday!

~t. KELLY~

Well, basically I like prefer country life. because my charater is so lyric.

>> Well, basically i prefer country life because I am a poetic person.

I want to live at clean air region and take it easy.

>>  I want to live with clean air and take things easy.

My wife don\'t like it.

>>  My wife doesn\'t like it.

she is so smart and she likes department store etc. 

>> She is so smart and she likes going to department stores and etc. 

sometimes we argured about that.

>> Sometimes we argue about that.

I worry about this problem after my retirement.

>> Correct.

Today I am very busy.

>> Correct.

I have to visit my customer in Seoul and I\'ll come back late tonight. 

>> Correct.

I have a reservation to play golf early tomorrow morning at 5 AM.

>> I have a reservation to play golf tomorrow at 5 AM.

 On Sunday I have a graduates\' association of my high school.

>> On Sunday I have a graduates\' association with my batch mates in high school.

It is terrible hectic schdule.

>> It is a terrible and hectic schedule.

See you next Monday!

>> Correct.

Have a nice weekend! Bye bye!

>> Correct.

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