10-18 homework

2013-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Dalia

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When I was 5 years old,I was in the kindergarten. Our kindergarten gave some snacks every day. One day, our teacher gave us a piece of cheese. Everyone liked cheese. I ate a piece of cheese for the first time. I ate it. But it was so yucky! I vomitted it. Ever afterward, I don't like cheese.

강사 첨삭

[이름],   Wow you did well! Thank you so much for doing your homework.  Don\'t give up or get tired okay. See you in my class next week! Good Night!     When I was 5 years old,I was in the kindergarten. >> Correct !Our kindergarten gave some snacks every day. >> Correct !One day, our teacher gave us a piece of cheese. >> Correct !Everyone liked cheese. >> Correct !I ate a piece of cheese for the first time. >> Correct !I ate it. >> Correct !But it was so yucky! >> Correct !I vomitted it. >> Correct !Ever afterward, I don\'t like cheese. >> Since then, I don\'t like cheese anymore.

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