10-18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 5 years old,I was in the kindergarten.
Our kindergarten gave some snacks every day.
One day, our teacher gave us a piece of cheese.
Everyone liked cheese.
I ate a piece of cheese for the first time.
I ate it.
But it was so yucky!
I vomitted it.
Ever afterward, I don't like cheese.
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When I was 5 years old,I was in the kindergarten.
>> Correct !Our kindergarten gave some snacks every day.
>> Correct !One day, our teacher gave us a piece of cheese.
>> Correct !Everyone liked cheese.
>> Correct !I ate a piece of cheese for the first time.
>> Correct !I ate it.
>> Correct !But it was so yucky!
>> Correct !I vomitted it.
>> Correct !Ever afterward, I don\'t like cheese.
>> Since then, I don\'t like cheese anymore.
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