10/18 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it! How sweet of you to have this thoughts for your family and your in laws. Actually, it\'s a very nice dream and I believe you can attain it. They say that if you desire something good not only for your self but for others too, it will become true! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

My one of dream is living in a private house with my parents and parents in law.

>>One of my dream is living in a private house with my parents and parents in law.
Living in an apartment is general in Korea due to a small country area.

>>Living in an apartment is common in Korea due to its\' small land area. 
The apartment have several advantage such as easy maintenance, convenient facilities in the city.

>>Living in an apartment has several advantages such as easy maintenance and convenient and accessible facilities.
But, also there are many collision between the neighborhood.

>>But, there are also a lot of encounters amongst neighbors. 
I saw the news about the murder case due to the parking problem a month ago.

>>I watched a news about a murder case due to a parking problem a month ago.
So, I want to live in a private house, not apartment.

>>So, I want to live in a private house, not in an apartment. 
There will be three private houses with a public garden.

>>Correct
My family will live one house, my parents will be another house, my parents in law will live in another one.

>>My family will live in one house, my parents will be in another house and my parents in law will live in another one.
So, we need three houses.

>>Correct
I don\'t know It will be actualized or not.

>>I don\'t know if it will become a reality or not. 
But, I want to dream a dream for the future.

>>Correct