10/18 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What do you think is the worst thing that could ever happen to a person\'s life?]
I think the worst thing in life is sudden death.
Everyone wants to prepare the last by themselves in life.
I want to make my bucket list and do it one by one.
It needs time.
Even people in the hospital know when they will die approximately.
So, they leave a will to family and say goodbye before death.
I think it\'s sad but better than sudden death.
We can not expect the future.
So, we don\'t know we can live tomorrow or not.
I heard that dying while sleeping is the happiest death.
But, it is for very old people.
The sudden death is not mean the kind of things.
If we suddenly die due to the car accident, my personal identity is suddenly disappeared.
I sometimes very scare about that.
Even I will sick, I want to know as faster as possible and find the best way for my life.
On the contrary, I think the best thing in my life is going to Heaven with my husband at the same time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. I think we almost fear the same things, most especially death. Death of family and loved ones and our death is something dreadful to think about. But it is really something inevitable. We just really need to accept that it will soon happen, so we might as well live our lives to the fullest! ^ ^
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Everyone wants to prepare the last by themselves in life.
Everyone wants to prepare the last by themselves in life.
>>Everyone wants to prepare/be prepared until their last breath.
I want to make my bucket list and do it one by one.
I want to make my bucket list and do it one by one.
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It needs time.
It needs time.
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Even people in the hospital know when they will die approximately.
Even people in the hospital know when they will die approximately.
>>CORRECT
So, they leave a will to family and say goodbye before death.
So, they leave a will to family and say goodbye before death.
>>CORRECT
I think it\'s sad but better than sudden death.
I think it\'s sad but better than sudden death.
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We can not expect the future.
We can not expect the future.
>>We can not tell the future.
So, we don\'t know we can live tomorrow or not.
So, we don\'t know we can live tomorrow or not.
>>So we don\'t know whether our life continues tomorrow or not.
I heard that dying while sleeping is the happiest death.
I heard that dying while sleeping is the happiest death.
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But, it is for very old people.
But, it is for very old people.
>>CORRECT
The sudden death is not mean the kind of things.
The sudden death is not mean the kind of things.
>>Sudden death doesn\'t mean that kind of thing.
If we suddenly die due to the car accident, my personal identity is suddenly disappeared.
If we suddenly die due to the car accident, my personal identity is suddenly disappeared.
>>If we suddenly die due to a car accident, my personal identity will most likely disappear.
I sometimes very scare about that.
I sometimes very scare about that.
>>I\'m sometimes very scared of that.
Even I will sick, I want to know as faster as possible and find the best way for my life.
Even I will sick, I want to know as faster as possible and find the best way for my life.
>>If I will acquire a disease/illness, I want to know beforehand so I can do the best things in life.
On the contrary, I think the best thing in my life is going to Heaven with my husband at the same time.
On the contrary, I think the best thing in my life is going to Heaven with my husband at the same time.
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