10/19 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Most people travel to have a time for self-reflection.In my case, I have a time about it before I fall sleep.Because I don’t like to go on a trip alone. And I like to have a time to think about daily life every night./As I told you, during driving I usually think about
myself. Because it takes 2 hours to commute back and forth.I can take a time alone in my car. Sometimes I listen to radio or music during driving. My car is a space which nobody is in,It is very fit to think myself.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I think that you really love doing self reflection most of the time. It is a good way of solving your personal problems as well and a good way of making plans for the future.
Most people travel to have a time for self-reflection.
>>correct!
In my case, I have a time about it before I fall sleep.
>>In my case, I have a time about it before going to sleep.
Because I don’t like to go on a trip alone.
>>I don’t like to go on a trip alone,
And I like to have a time to think about daily life every night.
>>I’d like to think about my daily life every night.
As I told you, during driving I usually think about myself.
>>As I’ve told you even if I’m driving, I still think about myself,
Because it takes 2 hours to commute back and forth.
>>because it takes two hours to commute back and forth.
I can take a time alone in my car.
>>I can have time alone in my car.
Sometimes I listen to radio or music during driving.
>>Sometimes I listen to the radio or to my personal records while driving.
My car is a space which nobody is in,
>>My car is a place where I can be alone,
It is very fit to think myself.
>>It is a good place for me to think.
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