10/19 homework

The most important thing regarding my personal life is to feel happiness.Someone who can’t feel happiness of their life can’t be satisfied with their whole life. So they get lonely and depressed. Even though they don’t have enough money compared to the rich, but they could be satisfied their life if they can get happiness about small things.

Hi [이름]! This is a good composition. Your sentences are good, there were just some minor inconsistencies so please check on that. Keep on practicing, I know you can do better. Take care! BYE!   The most important thing regarding my personal life is to feel happiness. >> correct          Someone who can’t feel happiness of their life can’t be satisfied with their whole life. >> Someone who doesn’t feel any happiness in their life can’t be satisfied. So they get lonely and depressed. >> correctEven though they don’t have enough money compared to the rich, but they could be satisfied their life if they can get happiness about small things. >> Even if they don’t have enough money compared to the rich, they get satisfaction if the gain happiness from small things.