10. 19. Homework

2018-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: "What is the value of a family vacation?" I don't like to travel or spend time with my parents. Because we don't have any common conversation topic. So If I have some vacation, I will just stay at home while my parents travel. When my mom say to me someting specifically, I answered that like this, 'Please don't ask me anything. Please leave me alone.' I know if I say someting about me, she certainly criticize me.

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I don\'t like to travel or spend time with my parents. Because we don\'t have any common conversation topic. So If I have some vacation, I will just stay at home while my parents travel. When my mom say to me someting specifically, I answered that like this, \'Please don\'t ask me anything. Please leave me alone.\' I know if I say someting about me, she certainly criticize me.


I don\'t like to travel or spend time with my parents because we don\'t have any common topics to talk about. So if I will have some vacation, I will just stay at home while my parents travel, and when she say something specifically, I answered her this way \"Please don\'t ask me anything, and please leave me alone.\" because if I say something to her she always criticize me.

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