10.2 Homework

2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good morning! It's a great day because we can have a long holiday. Have a great holiday! What is the most attractive personality that a person can have? why? I like a person who have a gentle personality. I like a hard working person,too.If someone is idle, he will have much trouble,such as getting obesity,poor,and dieases.I think that people need to be more favorable,by that, the future of human society will become more enjoyable. Thank you! Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! I really love this day because we can have a long holiday. Have fun with you family. have a blast this weekend, Mr. [이름]! ~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It\'s a great day because we can have a long holiday. Have a great holiday!>> Correct.What is the most attractive personality that a person can have? why?I like a person who have a gentle personality. >> I like a person who has a gentle personality. I like a hard working person,too. >> Correct. If someone is idle, he will have much trouble, such as getting obesity, poor,and dieases. >> If someone is idle, he might end up becoming obese, poor, acquiring different diseases. I think that people need to be more favorable, by that, the future of human society will become more enjoyable. >> Correct. Thank you! Byebye! >> Correct.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·