10/2 homework

If I would be a fruit, I would be a tangerine. because not only I like the tagerine most, but also tangerine haven't any useless part. for example, after we eat tangerine, its seeds and peel will be left. than first, we can plant its seed and grow tangerine trees that give us delicious fruits anytime. Second, Do you know the fact that we can also eat tangerine's pills too? We can eat its pills as a cup of tea by drying it off in the sun. So, I want to be a tangerine, if i were a fruit.

Hi there dear [이름]^^   I really am so thankful to you because of the effort your showing not only during classes but also in accomplishing your homeworks. I\'m a bit awed since your composition was well constructed. The thoughts or ideas were organized. I like that you tried to make compound and complex sentences just be careful not to use words that aren\'t necessary or can be omitted. Nonetheless, you did a great job and hopefully in your succeeding compositions you will do better. Again, thank you and I\'ll see in you in class:)   ~Teacher Mayleen^___^     If I would be a fruit, I would be a tangerine. >> CORRECT OR >> If I\'d be a fruit I\'d choose to ba a tangerine.   because not only I like the tagerine most, but also tangerine haven\'t any useless part. >> Not only that I like tangerine the most but also because tangerine don\'t have any useless part.   for example, after we eat tangerine, its seeds and peel will be left. >> For example, after eating tangerine, the seeds and peeling will be left.   than first, we can plant its seed and grow tangerine trees that give us delicious fruits anytime. >> We can plant the seeds which will grow into tangerine trees and will give us delicious fruits in time.   Second, Do you know the fact that we can also eat tangerine\'s pills too? >>Do you know the fact that tangerine peelings can be eaten too?   We can eat its pills as a cup of tea by drying it off in the sun. >> We can turn the peelings into tea by drying it under the sun.   So, I want to be a tangerine, if i were a fruit. >> So I want to be a tangerine if I were a fruit.