10.2 homework

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>>> CORRECT!

OR>>> I can think of two ways to reduce illegal ticket selling.
 2. First of all, when the audiences are entering to stadium, we need to compare those tickets with their identity card.
>>>First of all, when the audience are entering the stadium, we need to compare those tickets with their identity cards.
3. However, if we do such a way, the people who received tickets for a gift could be get disadvantages.
>>>However, if we do it this way, the people who received tickets as gifts could have disadvantages.
4. so they need some papers which demonstrate that tickes are not illegal.
>>>So, they would need some papers to prove that the tickets are not illegally purchased.
 5. Secondly, the real policeman would pretend that they are purchaser and they would catch them confidentially.
>>>Secondly, policemen should pretend that they are buyers and catch the illegal sellers in secret.
6. if they do so, there will be some rumors among illegal tickets seller, then the numbers will be reduced.
>>>If they do so, rumors will spread among illegal ticket sellers and the others would be discouraged to continue selling illegally.
7. of course catching the illegal ticket sellers is not easy.

>>>Of course, catching the illegal ticket sellers is not easy.
8. but if the proper purchaser and policeman would have an effort, the problems will be solved slowly.

>>>But, if legitimate buyers and the policemen will make an effort to stop this, the problems will eventually be solved.