10/21 homework
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1. To stay in temple in Korea became very popular. To busy people, Buddhist temple is very good place where they can step back and catch their breath.
If you stay in there, you can take time for your self reflection and have vegetable Korean food.
2. As the interest in our health increases, the number of handmade hamburger restaurant is increasing as well.
To have that, I have a memory for waiting in a row in front of stores for 20 minutes.
3. The day before yesterday, my class was put off due to strong typhoon in Philippine.
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I'm very happy to receive your composition everyday.
I also noticed that your sentences were better since you started writing constantly.
I'm just beside you along the way in your English learning journey. Always smile and be happy!
Love,
Verna
Thank you for your daily correction for my composition.
>>Thank you for daily correcting my composition.
I think, writing in English helps me to improve my vocabulary and grammar skills.
>>Correct
I need your continued help and instruction for me.
>>I need your continues help and instruction to me.
Thanks you!!
>>Correct
1. To stay in temple in Korea became very popular. To busy people, Buddhist temple is very good place where they can step back and catch their breath.
1. To stay in temple in Korea became very popular. To busy people, Buddhist temple is very good place where they can step back and catch their breath.
>>Staying in the temple in Korea became very popular. To busy people, Buddhist temple is a very good place where they can step back and catch their breaths.
If you stay in there, you can take time for your self reflection and have vegetable Korean food.
If you stay in there, you can take time for your self reflection and have vegetable Korean food.
>> Correct
2. As the interest in our health increases, the number of handmade hamburger restaurant is increasing as well.
2. As the interest in our health increases, the number of handmade hamburger restaurant is increasing as well.
>> Correct
To have that, I have a memory for waiting in a row in front of stores for 20 minutes.
To have that, I have a memory for waiting in a row in front of stores for 20 minutes.
>>To have that, I remember waiting in a row in front of stores for 20 minutes.
3. The day before yesterday, my class was put off due to strong typhoon in Philippine.
3. The day before yesterday, my class was put off due to strong typhoon in Philippine.
>>The day before yesterday, my class was put off due to strong typhoon in the Philippines.
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