10.21 Homework

2013-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi teacher? Thank you very much for your encouring advice. I'm really happy and I am getting a confidence due to your warm concern. Thank you,again! Homework 1)I have two bikes. One is made in USA, another is made in China. 2)This hat is too large.Would you show me another one? 3)Since she was badly ill,her friend visited her every each day. 4)They live in a house which windows face south. 5)Kate's reading is better than anyone's in the class. I have a appointment domestic business trip tomorrow.so maybe I will take your call on my driving.

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Hello there! I am very glad that you feel more confident about your skills in English! You know that I\'m always here to help you improve. I believe that you will be even better in no time. Just take time to practice, because practice makes perfect! Always take care and keep it up! By the way, have a safe trip. T.Kelly ^^ Here are some of your corrections: Hi teacher? >> Hi teacher! Thank you very much for your encouring advice. >> Thank you very much again for your encouraging advice. I\'m really happy and I am getting a confidence due to your warm concern. >> I\'m really happy and I am confident due to your warm concern. Thank you,again!>>Thank you again!Homework >>CORRECT. >>You can also use: Here is the answers to my homework.1)I have two bikes. One is made in USA, another is made in China. >> I have two bikes. One is made in USA, the other is made in China.2)This hat is too large.Would you show me another one? >> CORRECT. Very good^^3)Since she was badly ill,her friend visited her every each day. >> Since she was badly ill, her friend visited her every other day.4)They live in a house which windows face south. >> They live in a house whose windows face south.5)Kate\'s reading is better than anyone\'s in the class. >> Kate\'s reading is better than anyone else\'s in the class.I have a appointment domestic business trip tomorrow. >> I have an appointment in a domestic business trip tomorrow. so maybe I will take your call on my driving. >> So maybe I will take your call while I\'m driving.

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