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2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>>Do you like meeting new people? It depends on who. I think, I'm a little bit picky person. Someone is nervous about it and someone does not mind it when they meet me first time. But I can catch their mind in a brief moment quite accurately all the time. So if my oppenent isn't uncomfortable with me, I can say, yes, I like meeting new people. But else, it's a fat chance for me to say yes. I don't want to make a weird relationship. In the later case, I give them formal greetings only and I go my way. *I'm sorry to bother you, teacher! I wrote too much :( I hope you understand, I really attempted to make those short but... yep..

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean


  Do you like meeting new people?

It depends on who.

>> I reckon it depends on the people I\'m meeting for the first time.


 I think, I\'m a little bit picky person.

>> I think I\'m a little particular when it comes to getting acquainted with strangers.


 Someone is nervous about it and someone does not mind it when they meet me first time.

>> Some people feel nervous when they meet me for the first time but others don\'t.


 But I can catch their mind in a brief moment quite accurately all the time.

>> However, I normally can guess what is in their mind.


 So if my oppenent isn\'t uncomfortable with me, I can say, yes, I like meeting new people.

>> or: So if the person I\'m meeting isn\'t uncomfortable with me, I can give a positive answer to the question.


 But else, it\'s a fat chance for me to say yes.

>> Otherwise, there\'s a fat chance of me saying yes.


 I don\'t want to make a weird relationship.

>> I don\'t want to make an awkward relationship.


 In the later case, I give them formal greetings only and I go my way.

>> In the latter case, I give them formal greetings only and then I go my way.


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